How to rewrite an Etsy listing description

Most weak descriptions fail in one of two ways: too little detail, or a wall of text. Here is a method that fixes both.

Last checked: October 2026.

Step by step

1. List the facts first. Materials, size, colours, what's included, care, processing and shipping time, personalisation. Measure the item; don't guess.
2. Write one opening sentence. What it is and who it's for, using the phrase a buyer would search.
3. Add what makes it different. How you make it, why you chose the material, any honest limits (for example, colour varies slightly between batches).
4. Put the details in a list. Buyers scan. Bullets beat paragraphs.
5. Close with one line. Gift idea, how to order, or an invitation to message you.
6. Cut filler. Delete "beautiful", "perfect", "great quality" unless you attach a fact.

Example (fictional product)

Before:

Candle. Smells nice. Great gift. Handmade with love.

After:

A hand-poured soy candle scented with lavender and cedar, for anyone who wants a calmer evening. Poured in small batches in an 8 oz amber jar.

• Wax: soy blend
• Size: 8 oz jar
• Burn time: about 40 hours (confirm with your own test)
• Ships within 2 business days

Trim the wick to 1/4 inch before each burn.

The after version says what it is, who it's for and what to expect, using only facts the seller can check.

See also the description template and the SEO checklist.

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